11.01.08

Rough Outline – “Baby’s Still Mine”

Posted in [babystillmine], [outline] tagged at 1:10 pm by creativelywrite

I’ve created a general outline for “Baby’s Still Mine”. It’s more for me than anything else as I’m sure most won’t necessarily get much out of it. But thought I would post it anyway just so you could all see where I was thinking of going with it all:

Baby Still Mine Rough Chapter Outline

1.    Keaghan/Neve/Liam – lazy Sunday Morning browsing real estate section
2.    Keaghan/Neve – discuss AI; Neve is anxious and unready
3.    Keaghan/Redmon – upset Neve wants to wait
4.    Neve/Selene – Neve expresses fears re: AI
5.    Keaghan/Liam – father/son outing
6.    Keaghan/Neve – house hunting
7.    Keaghan/Neve – revisit possibility of conception; Neve still no; Keaghan frustrated
8.    Neve/Liam – mother/son outing
9.    Neve/Mena – doctor’s appointment; Neve expreses fears; Keaghan in dark
10.     Neve/Keaghan/Liam – family time
11.     Keaghan/Mena – Mena calls for Neve; Keaghan suspicious
12.     Neve/Mena – pre-AI prep
13.     Keaghan/Neve – Keaghan finds info on AI realizes he’s been kept in dark; Keaghan/Neve argue; Keaghan leaves & stays out all night
14.     Neve/Keaghan – Neve worries all night; Keaghan comes home (was not where she thought)
15.     Keaghan/Liam – bedtime story (wedding)
16.     Keaghan/Liam/Neve – distance between parents; Liam notices and is his usual inquisitive self
17.     Neve/Selene – discuss issue; Selene aptly points out how Keaghan must be feeling (re: history repeating)
18.     Keaghan/Redmon – discuss issue, giving Neve space to move at own pace
19.     Keaghan/Neve/Liam – annual trip to beach house (gift from Keaghan for wedding)
20.     Keaghan/Neve – 1st real in depth conversation about conflict
21.     Keaghan/Liam – Keaghan teaches Liam to surf
22.     Neve/Liam – Liam bedtime story about his daddy saving them; Keaghan overhears
23.     Keaghan/Neve – discuss movement on AI issue; Keaghan acquiesces on issue but is saddened by it
24.     Keaghan/Neve/Liam – Keaghan still sad and distant
25.     Keaghan/Neve/Liam – housewarming party
26.     Keaghan/Neve – discuss baby; move forward
27.     Keaghan/Neve/Mena – doctor’s appointment
28.     Keaghan/Neve/Liam – dinner chatter
29.     Keghan/Neve/Mena – AI procedure
30.     Keghan/Neve – procedure fails
31.     Neve/Keaghan – discuss disappointment
32.     Neve/Liam – playtime at the pool
33.     Keaghan/Neve – discuss second procedure
34.     Keaghan/Neve – AI procedure #2
35.     Keaghan/Neve – discuss viability of moving forward; Neve depressed
36.     Keaghan/Redmon – discuss disappointment; discuss concern for Neve
37.     Selene/Neve – visits at Keghan’s request to check on her
38.     Keaghan/Neve/Liam – Liam’s birthday; Neve still depressed
39.     Keaghan/Neve – Keaghan says no more AI will adopt
40.     Keaghan/Neve – AI procedure #3
41.     Keaghan/Neve/Mena – news that procedure takes
42.     Keaghan/Neve/Liam – family time
43.     Keaghan/Neve/Liam – discuss addition to family; Liam struggles with thought of not being only child
44.     Keaghan/Neve – Post AI checkup; all is well
45.     Keaghan/Neve/Liam – working on the nursery
46.     Keaghan/Neve/Liam – family time; just for Liam; Liam acts out
47.     Neve/Selene – morning sickness
48.     Neve/Mena – doctor’s appointment; onset of complications
49.     Neve/Keaghan – discuss medical issues
50.     Neve/Liam – monther/son bonding
51.     Neve/Keghan – sonogram; sex of baby determined; medical complications further brought to light
52.     Keaghan/Redmon – discuss Keaghan’s fears for Neve and baby
53.     Keaghan/Neve – discuss how to move forward with med complications
54.     Keaghan/Neve/Liam – discuss what is going on with baby and Neve’s status
55.     Neve/Selene/Mena – girls day in
56.     Keaghan/Neve – Keaghan finds Neve incapacitated; fear that history really is repeating self
57.     Keaghan/Neve/Mena – at hospital; Neve ok
58.     Keaghan/Neve – discuss future and how to move forward if something happens
59.     Keaghan/Neve/Liam – family time
60.     Keaghan/Neve/Liam – new baby born

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